Growing story ideas

In between novel revisions this winter and spring, I’ve been working on a few short stories. The more compressed, quicker course of developing and honing these has helped me think about the process and purpose of telling stories, and today I’ll share some of what I am learning. Likewise, I would love to hear your own experience and wisdom.

I’ll start off with a methodological admission: I am much more a plotter than a pantser. That is to say, I find I write much better (and much more) when I have taken time to plan out my stories before I write them. I of course create along the way, recognize needs for changes to my plan, do often cut or fully reimagine planned scenes or add in others, but at a base, it’s critical for me to have that roadmap from which to start.

So let’s explore how those plans might be created. How do we begin to craft a compelling story in the vague spaces of our minds?

Columbines wild on the steps up to the road. They’re purple here. The ones we had in Minnesota were pink.

Awareness, inspiration

I do think that, to begin, there’s often a bit of the standing-in-the-shower-sudden-moment-of-clarity kind of inspiration that can jumpstart the story-making process. However, I think it’s a mistake, and a grave one, to simply wait for that inspiration to arrive.

At least for me, lack of inspiration and writer’s block usually have more to do with self-doubt and a subconscious avoidance of writing than they do with a lack of ideas out there in the world. Because truly, the world around us is an all-you-can-eat buffet of curious incidents, wrenching dilemmas, those ponderous questions. In the same way that after learning the word “epitome” we start to see it used everywhere, we must prepare our minds for stories, and then they will come.

It’s curious that, when we think about stories, things in the world around us, or the thoughts in our own minds, begin to look more like good story material than they did before. I suppose this is a kind of priming, and cultivating this brand of awareness is a huge boon to us storytellers.

When I’m searching for inspiration, I try to really search for it. I review recent memories and recall odd things I’ve seen happen. “What would happen if…” I ask, or “What’s the emotion behind…”. Curiosity, inquisitiveness, a peering into the depths of things, these can all be sources of inspiration. And when we adopt such an awareness habitually, when it becomes part of us in daily life, then showers and walks and daydreams can yield a harvest of ideas.

Seeds set to fly. We’ll see how many we can grow.

A gamut of starting points

In Twitter’s #WritingCommunity, a frequent question asked is the starting point of a story idea:

The point of germination can be any element that starts thoughts percolating. For some folks it’s a character or plot element. For me most recently it’s been an image, a philosophical question, or an emotion from personal experience. It’ll be something worth sharing with others. Something we are curious about. It needn’t be especially profound or developed yet–that will come. When those inspirations arrive, in whatever form, acknowledge and savor them.

How does your garden grow?

If I said I had a stock of brilliant ideas waiting for me to write them, it would be a lie. The truth is, at least in my current way of working, very few of my passing inspirations grow on into stories. I’m a pretty one-project-at-a-time kind of person, and this means that when a story finishes (as has just happened), I find myself back in a where-do-I-start kind of mind.

Like a particle-antiparticle pair, spontaneously erupting into being and then annihilating, or like a seed that falls on asphalt, most of the good ideas pass us by. We’re only human. We can only write so many stories, alongside work and life and cooking and our family and friend relationships.

Having a golden idea, the kind that fires up the mind, that is a first step. But to build it into a breathing story, we must pay it attention, coax it up, and consciously explore it. This is again where the awareness of the mind, our focus, is critical, because we have the power to hold that idea and help it blossom, or to let it go.

A lot of my conscious idea-cultivating happens on walks, or I’ll sit here on the sofa, computer closed, eyes closed, holding that idea in my awareness, midwifing it slowly into a maturer being. Often too, I’ll think and type–freewriting, essentially. I try to type out my stream of consciousness, asking questions, positing potential branches and leaves, then pruning back. I’ve occasionally done this longhand, but I find that typing goes faster and so allows me to more authentically record my thought processes.

In this active brainstorming stage, I am fleshing out things like character and plot, setting, the portion of the full narrative I’ll tell, point of view, the core skeleton of it all. Then I can move into a more structured outline, where I usually plot out by scene, telling the story to myself and solving problems of worldbuilding, cliche, and readers’ potential interpretations. From there, I write.

We’ve got volunteer chives growing in the yard. They bloom these beautiful flowers. They’re tasty too.

Building the context

The content of these brainstorms involves the gradual fleshing out of context for my situation/image/question inspiration seed. I’ve got this one element around which I want to build a story, and in the case of fiction that means constructing and combining various story elements so that the resulting piece transmits something (an emotion, a thought, a question) to the reader.

When my seed is an emotion and my goal is to reconstruct that feeling in the reader, I backtrack and consider the road readers might need to take to get there. I tend to begin with broad plot strokes–what, generally, is going to happen? Then I’ll move to characters, setting, then back to refining plot.

I feel like I don’t yet have a good enough awareness of this process to spell out just what I am doing. It feels alchemical to me. A kind of engagement with the flux of character, setting, theme, plot, image–all are shifting, and gradually I pluck out a combination that I think will give me the effect I seek. For a short story, this often takes me a few sessions over several days.

However, the key for me is that I know that every choice I make is ultimately directed at creating a particular reader experience. Character personality choices are not arbitrary, nor are the worlds they’re sewn up in. Just as in lesson planning for a class, the best learning happens when there’s a clear goal in mind, and then I work backwards to find the path there. Again, that is never to say flexibility is not essential too. The story I just completed, it did transform as I wrote, and I adjusted my plan accordingly. I’m curious why it did change. It’s another thing I’m still trying to understand.

Wildflowers along the road.

How about you?

Over the last four years, my productivity as a writer has greatly increased. More than this, the quality of what I’m producing has improved. I think I owe both these changes to a growing awareness of the intentionality in the writing process. And I intend to keep going, daunting though the road may often be.

How do you go about beginning a new project? From what trees do you pluck ideas? How do you nurture, prune, and bid them flourish? Thanks for reading. Thanks for sharing. Happy living and writing to you all.

With love,
Jimmy

Advertisements

9 thoughts on “Growing story ideas

Add yours

  1. I am always looking for helpful posts on writing! I usually pluck my inspiration from daily occurrences, finding a piece of writing I really enjoy, or from sitting with a blank mind until something comes to me and I have to write it.

    Currently, I am editing my novel; I think it is good to remove all the seeds that made it into the book and did not flourish! There is another place for them somewhere.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Thanks for sharing. Yes, I think the sitting with the blank mind thing is a great source! Also, what you say about removing the ungrown seeds from your novel as you revise… I really like this idea. How’s the editing going?

      Liked by 1 person

      1. The editing is going quite well! I lost 31,000 words from my second novel and I have cut almost 11,000 words from the first one. It is refreshing to tighten up the writing without losing content.

        Like

  2. I began writing fiction late in life [daydreaming doesn’t count], and I find that I have to fly-by-the-seat-of, usually with music blaring, to silence the logical technical writer part of my brain. Sometimes it works beautifully. Other times it’s two steps forward and one step back. I spent two years recently, writing nothing but technical stuff, so getting back to fiction has been hard. I envy writers whose brains are constantly boiling over with ideas. :/

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Writing is such a strange thing, that we have to silence parts of our brains (for me it’s the self-doubt) in order to let the creative part flourish. Do you find that the music influences what you write? Do you choose music based on the story you’re working on?

      Like

      1. For me, music opens up the emotional parts of my brain, and that includes anger as well as sorrow, love, betrayal etc. And yes, I don’t have a conscious preference for the music [except that it must be orchestral] but if I don’t find the /right/ music, my writing stalls, big time. Just recently found the soundtrack to Game of Thrones season 6 and as soon as I heard it, I knew. The subconscious works in strange ways.
        Oh and…I have oodles of self doubt too. I get over it by making the first draft just for me. I rewrite, restructure etc etc for others, but that first run through is just for moi. 🙂

        Like

  3. I connect with your description of the process as an engagement with the story elements. That’s what it feels like to me, too. Although I can seat-of-the-pants a very short story, the longer a piece is, the more planning I need to do in order to feel confident of finishing satisfactorily. Like you, I’m flexible after planning, but I seem to need that safety net before I can take off and get anywhere with a longer piece. Excellent article!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you. : ) I think you’re right that the planning process really varies depending on the length of a piece. My novel outlines were way, way longer than the short story planning I’m doing now. The planning helps me keep the thematic focus and know which elements to emphasize as I go.

      What are you working on these days? How’s the writing going?

      Like

      1. I just came out of Story A Day May, which allowed almost no planning. Every morning, I grabbed a prompt or two and pounded out a (very short) story on the fly. GREAT exercise for all the writing muscles! Now I’ll be back to putting together a collection of short stories as a companion to the novel I just reissued, then editing ANOTHER reissue and putting together a companion book of short stories for that. So many projects; so little time, right?? 😀

        Like

Leave a Reply to Jaya Avendel Cancel reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

Create a website or blog at WordPress.com

Up ↑

Create your website at WordPress.com
Get started
%d bloggers like this: